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Title: Gravity
Rating: PG
Fandom: Firefly/Serenity
Disclaimer: Just playing, no profit. I don't own these characters, this universe, or anything else of value.
Characters: Simon, River
Summary: Written for [info]demonqueen666 's Sweet Drabblethon: for  [info]salean_m , who requested, "River, Simon - a lighter moment, letter, bribe."


 

“Come down from there,” Simon called.

 

River stayed by the ceiling, grinning. “Artificial gravity uses six percent of a Firefly's resources,” she said. “If we didn't use it--”

 

“The cargo would float around, and the tiniest bumps and air currents would send pieces of it in all different directions. By the time we made planetfall, nobody would be able to find anything. And the captain would be very upset.” Simon tried to keep his voice calm. “So come down here and turn it back on, or I'll get Wash or Kaylee to do it.”

 

“Can't you?”

 

Simon ran a hand through his hair. “No,” he said, darkly. “I don't know how to operate anything on this gorram ship, outside the infirmary.” He froze, face going suddenly pale. “Did you turn the gravity off in the infirmary?”

 

River laughed. “Everything is so light,” she said happily. “Everything in the cargo bay. But the rest of the ship is heavy.”

 

Ok, Simon thought, the medical supplies should be safe. He gripped the handrail harder. “That's why I need you to come down here. When we turn the gravity back on, you'll be heavy, too. And then you'll fall.”

 

River considered for a moment, head tilted to one side. “What will you give me?”

 

Simon blinked. “You're asking me to bribe you?” he demanded. Unbelievable – was there anything he hadn't already given her?

 

“Shepherd's bringing back vegetables,” River said. “There was a letter. From a gardener. He showed me.”

 

“Why would Shepherd Book show you a letter?”

 

River rolled her eyes. “He didn't show me.”

 

Simon sighed. “Just come down here, ok? I'll give you... half my vegetables.”

 

River smiled happily, and pushed herself off from the ceiling. When she reached ground level, she opened the control panel and calmly began pushing buttons.

 

Simon felt himself slowly begin to get heavier, until his feet were firmly resting on the floor again. “Thank you,” he snapped, glaring at his sister.

 

She smirked as she walked away. “You wouldn't have let me fall, anyway.”

 

“Don't be so sure,” Simon muttered.


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Date: 2009-10-17 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] girl-called-sun.livejournal.com
Simon's exasperation is just right here; it's present, but tempered by patience he always shows River.

I hope you write more Firefly fic.

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Date: 2009-10-17 11:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peroxidepirate.livejournal.com
Thanks! Seems like Firefly is my new thing, at least for now, so I imagine I will...

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Date: 2009-10-18 01:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] digitalviolets.livejournal.com
I like this interaction very much. :)

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Date: 2009-10-18 01:27 am (UTC)

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Date: 2009-10-18 02:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] demonqueen666.livejournal.com
"Shepherd's bringing back vegetables,” River said. “There was a letter. From a gardener. He showed me.”

“Why would Shepherd Book show you a letter?”

"River rolled her eyes. “He didn't
show me.”

Lols! Oh, so River. I love it.

Great job of capturing Simon and his weary patience at putting up with his sister. And clever way to use the prompt, too.

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Date: 2009-10-18 02:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peroxidepirate.livejournal.com
Thanks! I was feeling rather literal when I wrote it. :)

p.s. I love your icon!

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Date: 2009-10-18 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] entwashian.livejournal.com
Super cute! I agree with the above comment -- excellent use of the prompt!

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Date: 2009-10-18 04:48 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2009-10-18 06:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] salean-m.livejournal.com
This is perfect, thank you! And a really clever use of my prompt. :)

Also, the characterisation was really, really great. Simon's exasperation with River, and River's confidence in the fact that he would never have let her fall just fits their relationship so well.

Thank you again!

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Date: 2009-10-18 04:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] peroxidepirate.livejournal.com
Aww, I'm so glad you liked it! It's a fun challenge to write River with the right combination of insanity and clarity.

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Date: 2009-10-18 11:35 am (UTC)
meridian_rose: pen on letter background  with text  saying 'writer' (river)
From: [personal profile] meridian_rose
That was a lovely piece and so in character!

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Date: 2009-10-18 04:48 pm (UTC)

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